Score: 9

"Pretty Good."

submission: Life in the Portal: Clock

date: August 16, 2009

Oh Em Gee. Clock Day.

Anyway. This movie was actually up to a high standard on the holiest of days here at Newgrounds. Your animation was the absolute smoothest I have ever seen on Newgrounds. Every movement seemed so fluent. Excluding the one scene in the movie revolving around a few circles and an egg.

That was actually the worst part of the movie. I understand you wanted to give the spam view across and everything, But you dragged that joke out a bit too long. But it was funny for a little bit, But you pushed your luck.

Overall though, Good stuff. Fairly un-clock related for a daily winner today.

Score: 9

"Untold Origins."

submission: Zelda: UO Epis:7

date: August 16, 2009

Another great production overall.

Its safe to say your movies have basically the best story lines on Newgrounds. Your animation has grown and gotten so much better over your series. Although in the beginning it was still basically perfect, Its gone up from then too. The thing that surprises me with this animation is that it hasn't got a series page yet.

I mean its easily one of the most popular, and best animated series on the website. Anyway, The fact your movies are getting larger and longer is also a huge plus. As much as I like the series, Its better to have a long episode than a load of short ones.

If I'm going to find any flaws, There really minor. I think your biggest flaw would be along the lines of sketchy drawings. Such as when they're looking at Links hand, His hand looks out of proportion and its these little things that stand out.

Secondly, Would be your subtitles. I can't quite put my finger on it, But there seems to be something about them that doesn't look and feel right. As much as I like your color codes and so on. Just little improvements on this would be enough for me to find this even better - If possible.

- Instead of color codes. Draw your own version of there face & head and put it next to the subtitles when they're talking. Similar to how certain other games and movies have done it. I think its a more unique and graphically positive way to do your subtitles.

- About the 'box' the titles show up in. Instead of what, have your movie look like its 'Widescreen'. So there's a thin black strip at the top and bottom of the window. And just slip the titles in there. That way it doesn't give the illusion of taking up the movies space.

Don't feel obligated. Still brilliant.

Score: 10

"20 Minute Epic."

submission: Thwomps: The Movie

date: August 14, 2009

I think a long movie, Deserves a long review.

And I can somewhat deliver on that. Anyway, For the first time I think I'd ever say this to an artist, Stick to sprites man. Your not producing the mainstream view of sprites. Which is basically a few fight scenes shot from one angle with no audio or voices whatsoever.

But then you waltz in, And bring the standard of quality sprites movies up about 10 notches. I mean, Granted, This was a sprite movie, But you still did a lot of animating on your own and did some things that can't just be cut from a sprite sheet and pasted. Such as the mop throw.

The movie contained the best features.. Ever.
- Strong voice and audio choice.
- Amazing storyline and length.
- Great animation and graphics.
- Hilarious humor and fight scenes.

The end was a little on the strange side, But made me laugh. Man, You really delivered on this movie, And I'm sure you can watch this and be really proud of what you pulled off. This is quite literally s trand setting movie in Newgrounds. Your a champ.

Thwomps! I want an encore.

Score: 10

"Perfect Effort."

submission: Chemical Rush

date: August 16, 2009

This is ideal for Sonic Fans. Oh, And anyone with ears.

I liked the placement of the additions. A lot of the time when you hear a remix, There a shitload of clutter and basically it becomes too layered and its impossible to even hear the original piece of work being mixed. You kept to the original a bit, But still got a huge portion added on.

Anyway, The quality and sound clips were all crisp and clear. Nothing cut off or was completely drowned out of the song. So overall this is deserving of its current spot within the top 50 of Newgrounds.

Keep this standard up.

Score: 8

"I'm Gonna Be Honest."

submission: A N.O.B.M. (Elektro Mix)

date: August 16, 2009

I think this is slightly over rated.

Don't get me wrong, Its a great piece of work. But it seems to be a pile of layers on top of each other without too much structure throughout the entire song. That fact adds a bit of that Dance feel to it, But it seems over packed.

Secondly, Although the rest is too much, The first 40 seconds or so isn't enough. I wouldn't hold onto the hope of top 50 for too long man, In all honesty. This song definitely deserved some recognition. But I don't think its that great overall.

Put more structure into your future works and you'll have much better outcomes. You can obviously get good quality sound clips and so on. Now you just have to plan things out a little more before completing them.

Still a good piece.

Score: 9

"That Was Good."

submission: Dirty Dick Lips

date: August 14, 2009

I looked at the name, And had to listen.

This reminds me a little bit of Stampers 'Dick Clubbin'. I think your beat was absolutely awesome with this piece. Definitely the high point of listening to this was hearing the background to the song. As for flaws.

I understand that this was made by you as a joke more than anything, But I think you could have made the lyrics flow a little better. Sometimes you had big pauses just so the rhyme would exist. I think you should make another funny song like this, And put even more effort in.

Its brilliant. In its own little world.